Friday, September 26, 2008

Common Ground By John Daniel & Reflection

Everywhere on Earth, we beginnings:

fur, feather, scale, shell, skin, bone, blood,

like an infant discovering sound after sound
a voice is finding its tongue
in the slop and squall of birth
It sounds,
and we, in whom Earth chose to light
a clear flame of consciousness,
are only beginning to learn the language-

who are made of the ash of stars,
who carry the sea we were born in,
who spent millions of years learning to breathe,
who shivered in fur at the reptiles' feet,
who trained eyes and hands in the trees
and came down, slowly straitening
to look over the grasses, to see
that the world not only is
but is beautiful-
we are Earth learning to see itself,
to hear touch, and taste. What it wants to be
no one knows: finding a way
in starlight and dark, it begins in beauty,
it asks only time.

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I didn't choose this poem for any particular reason other than it stood out from the rest. I'd say I enjoy specific bits and pieces of it but overall, I wish i knew John Daniel's true meaning behind it. It is probably what frustrates me the most about reading others writing. I want to understand and acknowledge his thoughts just like i do my own, not only because I'm curious, but because what these words might mean to me, might not mean the same to him.
"the world not only is
but is beautiful-"
I feel like he can appreciate his surroundings, and a lot of other parts of Earth that we all take advantage of. I'm glad he can express that in his writing.

Wednesday, September 24, 2008

outside free write

Can you imagine
Trees, dirt, and air
Every breath you take
Enjoying every bit
I can't help but notice 
How suffocated we've become
Yes, by you
We all contribute
We've all made this mess

Your hunt for success
You and your greed
A feeling of accomplishment
From this shit we don't need

Don't you want to see more growth
with agriculture and beauty?
To lay upon this grass 
and feel you've done your duty?

Wednesday, September 17, 2008

what a mess

as tough as bark
her skin is like an outer shell that covers her dense inside
hiding handfuls of new seeds
just waiting to be discovered

each little morsel bursting
a new surprise
a new discovery
but by the time you've gotten to know her
your hands are drenched

dripping with inner turmoil
shes just a mess
creating stains where ever she goes

Tuesday, September 9, 2008

poem imitation

My patience gets smaller by the day
the road calls my name
I want to be that free spirit
That I've always wanted to be
I'm ready
Ready for some new faces
Ready to take on a new challenge
It's time to leave this all behind

My days aren't easy
you haven't got a clue.
I'm learning not to rush things
you can't rush growth.

I have my reasons
behind why i want to escape
i crave more meaning
but why i want to disappear
even i can't explain that to you

You can't always run from your problems
I've always been told
learn from my mistakes

Monday, September 8, 2008

firsties

Greetings readers. Writing is my thing, but not necessarily creatively...so this will be a challenge. Id like to think of myself as a free-writer, without all the personal nonsense. Enjoy.